Writing dialogue that sounds natural is one thing. Writing dialogue that reflects faith, family dynamics, and real-life tension without sounding cheesy? That’s something else. One of the best examples comes from Chapter 2 of my upcoming re-released Christian romance novel, Storms of Love.

Here are 4 tips inspired by Ellie and Monét’s phone conversation—two sisters navigating life, love, and everything in between.

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1. Don’t Over-Explain. Let Tone and Emotion Carry the Weight.
When Ellie calls Monét, we’re dropped into a conversation that feels like it’s been happening for years. You don’t need backstory in the dialogue itself—their tone tells you everything. The sighs. The sarcasm. The hesitation. Let your characters’ voices carry their emotional weight.

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2. Let Faith Feel Organic, Not Forced.
Ellie’s faith shows up when Monét asks how she’s stayed pure and hopeful. She doesn’t preach. She shares honestly: “I just trusted His promise… I think the fact that I focus on pleasing God, versus me seeing it as deprivation has helped.” This kind of dialogue resonates with readers who want characters to be real about their spiritual journey—flawed, but faithful.

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3. Use Back-and-Forth Rhythm to Build Relationship
Notice how Ellie and Monét interrupt each other, switch topics, laugh, and push each other’s buttons? That’s real sibling energy. Don’t make conversations too tidy. Let the rhythm be a little messy—like real life.

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4. Use Conflict to Show Growth, Not Just Drama
The tension between Ellie and Monét isn’t just there for entertainment—it reveals how each woman is changing. Ellie chooses patience over pride. Monét wants to be loved but is unsure how to trust again. Through their words, we see their flaws, faith, and forward movement. Let your dialogue do more than fill space—let it move your characters forward.

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Want to read the scene for yourself?
You can find the full excerpt in Chapter 2 of Storms of Love, coming September 9th! Until then, bookmark this blog or subscribe to stay inspired as you write stories that reflect your heart and your hope in Christ.

Ya Girl,

Mya Kay