If you’ve been wondering how to write a Christian novel—or you’ve Googled how to write a great first chapter—you’re not alone. Starting your book can feel overwhelming. There’s pressure to get it perfect, to introduce your characters, hint at the plot, and keep readers hooked... all without saying too much too soon.

The truth? Whether you’re writing a Christian romance novel, a contemporary faith-based story, or just the book that’s been on your heart for years, your first chapter matters. But it doesn’t have to be stressful.

Let’s break down what makes a powerful first chapter—using my upcoming re-release Christian romance novel, Storms of Love, as a case study. Check out my first chapter here so you can see how I infused these tips:

1. Start your story with action, not explanation.

In Storms of Love, we meet Ellie working on a movie set in Los Angeles. From the first line, readers are immersed in her world. Instead of overloading the reader with backstory, we drop them into her everyday hustle and let them learn as they go.

2. Reveal character through what they do and say.

If you're writing a Christian book, your characters’ faith should show up in subtle, natural ways. For Ellie, it's in the way she affirms young Zoe with a “Black girl magic” mantra, handles disrespect with grace, and stays rooted in excellence. No sermon required, just authentic behavior.

3. Tease, don’t tell.

Your reader doesn’t need to know everything in chapter one. Give them a reason to keep turning pages. The scar on Ellie’s neck, her exhaustion, her no-nonsense attitude—these all hint at deeper things to be revealed later.

4. End with connection or curiosity.

Your first chapter is a handshake. Invite readers into the journey. Ellie literally bumps into the love interest—Jeremiah—and by the end of the chapter, we know there's something there. It’s enough to keep readers invested.

If you’re serious about writing your Christian novel, whether it’s a romance like Storms of Love or the faith-filled story God has placed on your heart, you don’t have to figure it out alone.

Sometimes what you really need isn’t another generic writing tip. You need clarity. Strategy. Honest feedback. Accountability. And someone who understands both craft and calling.

That’s where coaching comes in.

I work with aspiring and developing authors who are ready to stop circling their story and finally write it, with confidence and purpose. Whether you’re struggling with your first chapter, stuck in the messy middle, or unsure how to shape your faith thread naturally into your plot, we’ll create a plan that fits you and your vision.

If you’ve been wondering how to write a Christian novel that’s powerful, polished, and spiritually authentic, let’s talk.

Click here to learn more about working with me for one-on-one coaching. Your story deserves to be written well—and you don’t have to do it by yourself.